I turn out the lights and sit on the low chair in my balcony. The warm cup of steaming hot coffee is a godsent. For the first time in two weeks, I am able to take some advantage of the outrageous rent I pay. The lights in the million dollar homes on the hill to the north-east are going off one-by-one. Above one of them I see a new set of lights flashing in the sky. I look up, and as the two-seater aircraft drones into and then away from my interest, I catch a lone star with a dull shine in its own little niche in the evening sky. Unimportant, yet embellishing the scene in some way. In a while, it will be right above me, in the center of things. Then it will pass into the dawn.... Life reflects the cosmos.
All around the lawn below, an army of crickets whistles away like drunken drill sergeants. The sprinklers come on, to add to the calming din of the night. Ever so slightly, the fog is setting in, and this still-life will be smudged off the canvas in a bit. To my left, a bat flits in and out of the walkway light, having a hearty meal of gnats. My eyes change focus from the bat to that girl in the balcony across. She sits all drawn up and cocooned in her hippy quilt. Her glasses fog up and clear as she breathes into her own cup. They fog up and clear and fog up again. This time she smiles when they clear.... I smile back and raise a toast. She does the same. Done with the coffee, I get up for one last look at the sky. The lone star is still a ways from the center. A little below it, another twinkles brightly and falls in slow motion -a dying star to die for...I go back in, and another weekend draws to a close.
Living alone lets one stand aside on the platform, sipping coffee and hop back on when the train moves again.
All around the lawn below, an army of crickets whistles away like drunken drill sergeants. The sprinklers come on, to add to the calming din of the night. Ever so slightly, the fog is setting in, and this still-life will be smudged off the canvas in a bit. To my left, a bat flits in and out of the walkway light, having a hearty meal of gnats. My eyes change focus from the bat to that girl in the balcony across. She sits all drawn up and cocooned in her hippy quilt. Her glasses fog up and clear as she breathes into her own cup. They fog up and clear and fog up again. This time she smiles when they clear.... I smile back and raise a toast. She does the same. Done with the coffee, I get up for one last look at the sky. The lone star is still a ways from the center. A little below it, another twinkles brightly and falls in slow motion -a dying star to die for...I go back in, and another weekend draws to a close.
Living alone lets one stand aside on the platform, sipping coffee and hop back on when the train moves again.
9 comments:
Living alone lets one stand aside on the platform, sipping coffee and hop back on when the train moves again.
Beautiful and so true.
wow.....some vivid description of the night there, mindsurfer :) there is a touch of content to the whole picture.....feels amazingly refreshing...
enig!
hey ms,
dont fall in love with the platform is all I have to tell you.. the platform is just a resting place.. before you can hop back on the bandwagon!! :)
keep writing buddy and give us more visuals of the place.. waiting to hear it from you.
-fc
whoa!!! that was awwwesome...what beans do u use dude?? sure u were not smoking something with the coffee? :-P
MS's blog reminds me strangely of some abs.fantastic fiction that used to populate magazines in the 80-90s..keep the single chronicles comin MS, it got great visualization!
Beautiful!! Ditto el enigma!!
Your sound so content...restful, peaceful. Love the mention of the sprinklers...love sprinklers...:-)))
Le'Chaim!!
(To Life!!)
Thank you all!
IW,
To paraphrase from the matrix -"There is no girl" :-)
funny,
I am hopping onto passenger trains :-)
buck,
LOL. no comment ;-)
sunshine,
what can I say? Will write longer next time :-)
-MindSurfer
Excellent piece!
Seriously hope that there shouldn't be a - III version of Living Alone. Its high time you start living together. Just keep in mind that - Love is not a pre-requisite for being able to live together.
Very smooth.
Jazz like. To read over a second time and find new meaning. Rare to find a piece you can take seriously and comment sincerely upon. This is as much as I can say without being insincere. i hope to keep visiting.
Regs
BS
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